tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post1578348498560113694..comments2023-10-18T11:39:48.998-04:00Comments on NADJA NOTARIANI : An Author's Adventures: Campaign Writing Challenge ~ 05 September 2011Nadja Notarianihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comBlogger83125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-70908581377328394092011-09-12T18:03:56.200-04:002011-09-12T18:03:56.200-04:00Thanks everyone! I've been able to visit so m...Thanks everyone! I've been able to visit so many great blogs and read so many great posts as I visit back...~ NadjaNadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-23365635742040194772011-09-12T15:11:06.595-04:002011-09-12T15:11:06.595-04:00Great flash-fiction! Your 200 packed a lot of punc...Great flash-fiction! Your 200 packed a lot of punch! Thank you so much for stopping by my blog and your sweet words of support!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691497935668743387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-50700305450977915912011-09-11T16:37:12.003-04:002011-09-11T16:37:12.003-04:00Hi,Nadja! Cool scene. I'm an Historical roman...Hi,Nadja! Cool scene. I'm an Historical romance junkie too. That's what it felt like. Am I right? Great job.Mina Burrowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14483363743530076604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-33231612018618343762011-09-11T04:42:01.296-04:002011-09-11T04:42:01.296-04:00You have crammed a lot of emotion in this scene. I...You have crammed a lot of emotion in this scene. I enjoyed the small snippet and I found myself wondering about your MC, where this is set and in what time.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-92181490965345295162011-09-10T15:38:51.686-04:002011-09-10T15:38:51.686-04:00You don't come across too many anticipated arr...You don't come across too many anticipated arranged marriages. I love that you made it exciting, romantic and dare I say...juicy:)<br />Great job!Deanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17958057331230037880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-37344539852312276772011-09-10T14:07:55.868-04:002011-09-10T14:07:55.868-04:00You did a FANTASTIC job with your 200 words, Nadja...You did a FANTASTIC job with your 200 words, Nadja! Love the emotion you packed into this. Great story!Dora Hiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00776046195295470466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-68268105347167513042011-09-10T13:43:23.566-04:002011-09-10T13:43:23.566-04:00Oh this was fun. I love a happy ending :-)Oh this was fun. I love a happy ending :-)Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-53261043964615511162011-09-10T11:10:39.052-04:002011-09-10T11:10:39.052-04:00Deniz, Sangu, Julius, and Avery...Thank you :) Wh...Deniz, Sangu, Julius, and Avery...Thank you :) What a great challenge this is! I've now read through entry 165. Whew! There are so many more... did you see?...over 300! ~ NadjaNadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-13147132132224628142011-09-09T23:42:12.889-04:002011-09-09T23:42:12.889-04:00Exquisite. :) Your descriptions are so poetic, and...Exquisite. :) Your descriptions are so poetic, and the romance... swoon worthy.Avery Marshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615057600393412922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-79721501265435706782011-09-09T23:33:46.464-04:002011-09-09T23:33:46.464-04:00I can say that I am not one for romantic readings....I can say that I am not one for romantic readings. This, however, pulls you in. It takes you there to the sights, the feeling, and the emotion: anticipation, fear, and excitement. Keep it up, Nadja! Excellent work.Julius Cicerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02427230227865439672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-81635190078853120192011-09-09T19:47:33.022-04:002011-09-09T19:47:33.022-04:00Oooh I love the romance there!Oooh I love the romance there!Sangu Mandannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09464061265952789628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-11338497032980044742011-09-09T18:50:44.253-04:002011-09-09T18:50:44.253-04:00Lovely. So much evoked by that phrase, 'I have...Lovely. So much evoked by that phrase, 'I have come to take you home.'Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-40182175706787115592011-09-09T12:05:19.852-04:002011-09-09T12:05:19.852-04:00Again, thank you all! :) Patient - I think, afte...Again, thank you all! :) Patient - I think, after reading your entry - that you know quite a bit about writing romance! ;)<br />~ NadjaNadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-6111775174199659982011-09-09T02:55:28.948-04:002011-09-09T02:55:28.948-04:00Nice! Beautiful, tastefully sexy, yet sweet. :) If...Nice! Beautiful, tastefully sexy, yet sweet. :) If only all arranged marriages could be so promising. ;)Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-68358182435630789322011-09-08T09:09:25.999-04:002011-09-08T09:09:25.999-04:00Wow, this is one of the most beautifully worded, p...Wow, this is one of the most beautifully worded, poetic love stories I have read, wish there was more. Like others have said you will be hard to beat I think. I know I could learn a lot from you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-57897773046214212762011-09-08T00:40:54.662-04:002011-09-08T00:40:54.662-04:00LovelyLovelyAlica McKenna Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159703224812368401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-79847103154089002502011-09-07T15:39:23.397-04:002011-09-07T15:39:23.397-04:00I love the ending. Such a great build up, and, yes...I love the ending. Such a great build up, and, yes, very romantic. <br /><br />(I thought I'd already commented on your flash, but don't see a comment, so if I'm duplicating myself, apologies.)Sylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02913456656863545074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-28079000037713086522011-09-07T12:35:24.201-04:002011-09-07T12:35:24.201-04:00The first romantic piece I've read for this ch...The first romantic piece I've read for this challenge; it was lyrical and tastefully written. :)yikicihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02053193063885023803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-80976791582397192592011-09-07T12:32:44.360-04:002011-09-07T12:32:44.360-04:00'Gulp'
'...Wonders if I'm up for t...'Gulp'<br />'...Wonders if I'm up for the challenge...lol'<br />Thank you Rance! Really. ~ NadjaNadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-36454619894302447662011-09-07T11:29:32.910-04:002011-09-07T11:29:32.910-04:00*Wow.*
I'm going to be very blunt here. As a...*Wow.*<br /><br />I'm going to be very blunt here. As a man, I often think I lack the capacity to be enamored with or turned on by words. Not the case here, Nadja -- this is one of the most compassionate, intriguing, and sexy pieces I've read in quite awhile. Your word choice is beautiful and compelling.<br /><br />I wish you all the best! I'm so excited to read more when you post it!<br /><br />- RanceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-65740278020090127902011-09-07T11:06:26.711-04:002011-09-07T11:06:26.711-04:00Very beautiful! I loved the hope and trust it conv...Very beautiful! I loved the hope and trust it conveyed. :DDanyelle L.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10366276085080565870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-68266604528913944232011-09-07T11:01:16.556-04:002011-09-07T11:01:16.556-04:00You all are just great to leave such wonderful com...You all are just great to leave such wonderful comments! <br />Jamila ~ 'swooning'...quite possibly my favorite word in all the comments. I want to swoon...really. Ha!<br />~ NadjaNadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-84259593869907667312011-09-07T05:26:42.860-04:002011-09-07T05:26:42.860-04:00LOVE.
Also, swooning. :DLOVE.<br /><br />Also, swooning. :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-41646005648364106402011-09-07T03:49:14.586-04:002011-09-07T03:49:14.586-04:00This was so lyrical in the way it flowed. Really e...This was so lyrical in the way it flowed. Really enjoyed this.Isis Rushdanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773053495985834484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6889983057537109989.post-86171618323040074802011-09-07T02:41:09.755-04:002011-09-07T02:41:09.755-04:00I love the way you described the scenery..nice sto...I love the way you described the scenery..nice story!<br /><br />http://www.doreenmcgettigan.comDoreen McGettiganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11691803968607905576noreply@blogger.com